Monday, 17 September 2012

Talking to me



        As I stare at the girl in the mirror
        She blinks when I blink
        I wonder if people felt the tremor
        all disguised with the perfect grin



        She knows my every pain
        She truly understands me
        She has been my friend
        She sees the me I see

        I look at the still image
        But I can see through her soul
        More than what people try to get
        More than all she tries to show

        No one can know her better
        No one can love her more
        Time has made me see clearer
        I promise to let this love grow

                                                ....September 2012
                                                       Janyl Benyl



Have a lovely week ahead, lovelies!

Love always
JB

21 comments:

  1. Nice Piece.. have a lovely week too..

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  2. wishing you a pleasant week also.

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      I appreciate it
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  4. "No one can know her better...No one can love her more"true... have an awesome week ahead dearie.

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  6. Aww..really nice..love it :)
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  7. We ourselves, nobody else, knows us through and true; the pains, the thrills, the hopes and all. Lovely...

    - LDP

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  8. this is a lovely poem..
    yes oo, who else can know us better than ourselves apart from 'WE' and God..

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  9. No one can love 'me' more indeed. Good one MsJB

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  10. This is so true..No one can love you more than you should love yourself apart from God..

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